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The silhouted eyes
in the darkness
Stare me through
with Self-indulgence

The haunting breaths
upon my neck, burns
Terrorize
Me as im alone

The lustful touch
Is invisible to me
it hurts so much
as the Wicked consumes me

The reek of rape
is uncontrollably seeping
I cant escape
for my Innocence hes keeping

Voiceferous violations
from this criminal, he screams
The vile words of rancor
that pervades inside of me

im so lost and confused
powerless and numb
Please, come to my rescue
For these stupored strings are strung

whens this corruption going to end?
when will this pain stop?
the Shadowed man begins to win
I cannot breath at all

Every second i a painful hour
as fear invades my mind
The strength of me, he devours
i wish to see a sign

Extricate me-
from this ravish
mutilate the-
Hallow and sadist

The varnish of my tears
Coats my bruising eyes
the wakening of this fear
conquers as i cry...

Lost...
Breathless...
Numb and Hopeless

Empty...
Powerless...
Falling Silence

Alone...
Darkness...
Sombered and Lifeless
In the ABYSS
of my Blood---
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Earthen-Angel Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2009
POWERFUL WOULD BE THE ONE WORD I WOULD USE TO DESCRIBE THIS WORK. Nicely done and it flows quite well. I wonder where you get your writing skills from?
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Bagoon825 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked that it was so deep and sad.
You are an amazing writer!
I have got to fave this ^^
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MoonEnigma Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2006
I like, especialy the first stanza
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matcH-Box Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2004
Wow this is amazing. Rape is really scary. *shivers*
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stat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2004
By the way.... you have no clue how jealous i am of your writing skills.... :cry:

:+fav:
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nocturnal-instincts Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2004   Writer
:kiss: thanks :tear:
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stat Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2004
Wow.... such feeling involved in this one, I love it soooo much. This and let the ending begin are BY FAR my favorites, it's sooooo good. You are a really awesome writer, and you should understand and accept it now.... I'm so proud to be with you. Just wow. :worship:
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nocturnal-instincts Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2004   Writer
:blush: thanx
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dyingofdepression Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2004   Writer
awwwz i love it its great good work keep it up
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